Ideas for our storyboard

We began to think about the shots, framing, composition etc. of our trailer which we want to  put in our storyboard. We looked at a trailer that was in our influences again to get more of an idea how we are to structure our trailer. After having a discussion in lesson, we decided on the structure of our trailer and the storyboard below is a draft that Mimoza drew. The draft emphasises the points that we would like to  include in our film clearly. However, we came to a final decision that giving away the ending at the beginning of the trailer won't work very well as the audience gets the first impression of the film in 15 seconds as well as the fact that they are just being introduced to the film so this scene being at thge beginning would lead to some confusion. We will introduce the audience to our trailer by the  voiceover and sweet love so that they are guided through our trailer and understand clearly what is happening.